Writing Voices Learners Believe
Start with character backstories that quietly shape word choice and rhythm. A stressed supervisor uses clipped sentences; a reflective teammate asks layered questions. Read dialogue aloud to hear awkward phrasing and remove classroom jargon. Replace directives with offers, and judgments with observations. Realistic hesitations—ums, pauses, ellipses—can help, but use them sparingly. When learners recognize themselves or colleagues in the voices, they lean in, respond honestly, and retain more.